Reputation: 1
This is for an assignment for a class. I want to create a register type application for a donut shop. The application should accept "l"
to list flavors, "a"
to add flavors, "d"
to delete flavors, and "e"
to exit. The prices should be listed in ascending order. When adding a flavor, it should ask first the flavor, then the price.
I have the application working. It uses Jekyll (what the class uses).
item = {}
item_asc = {}
puts "Welcome to d0nutz flavor menu"
input = ""
division_line = lambda {30.times {|x| print "="}}
while input != "e"
division_line.call
puts "\n(l)ist flavors\n(a)dd a flavor\n(d)elete a flavor\n(e)xit application"
division_line.call
print "\nYour choice: "
input = gets.chomp
case input
when "l"
item_asc.each {|x,y| puts "Flavor: #{x} - Cost: $#{y}"}
when "a"
puts "Enter new flavor: "
flavor = gets.chomp
puts "Enter cost: "
cost = gets.chomp.to_i
item[flavor] = cost
item_asc = item.sort_by {|flavor,price| price}
input = ""
when "d"
puts "Enter a flavor to remove"
to_delete = gets.chomp
item.delete("#{to_delete}") {|x| puts "#{x} not found."}
item_asc = item.sort_by {|flavor,price| price}
item_asc.each {|x,y| puts "Flavor: #{x} - Cost: $#{y}"}
input = ""
when "e"
else
puts "\nThat is not a recognised command"
end
end
However it's even uglier than what I have here. I appreciate any input. I am interested in seeing what I should have done for clean up purposes, and maybe adding classes/methods where they should be, and making this more Rubyesque.
Upvotes: 0
Views: 55
Reputation: 168269
I would change the code to the following. This is not refactor since it is not equivalent to your code. In particular, it is not inconsistent like your code is. For example, when it prompts, it does not sometimes change a line and sometimes not as in your code; My code never changes a line. My code also always prints the list after an operation, unlike your code, which does not do so particularly when an item is added. Also, unlike your code, it does not end a message sometimes with and sometimes without a period; Messages in my code never end with period.
def prompt s
print "#{s}: "
gets.chomp
end
def list_items
@items.each{|k, v| puts "Flavor: #{k} - Cost: $#{v}"}
end
def sort_items
@items = @items.sort_by{|flavor, price| price}.to_h
list_items
end
puts "Welcome to d0nutz flavor menu"
@items = {}
loop do
puts(
?= * 30,
"(l)ist flavors",
"(a)dd a flavor",
"(d)elete a flavor",
"(e)xit application",
?= * 30,
)
case prompt("Your choice")
when ?l
list_items
when ?a
@items[prompt("Enter new flavor")] = prompt("Enter cost").to_i
sort_items
when ?d
@items.delete(prompt("Enter a flavor to remove")){|k| puts "#{k} not found"}
sort_items
when ?e
break
else
puts "That is not a recognised command"
end
end
Upvotes: 2